Question number 5: how would you define the mood of the people on the bus at the beginning of the journey to Camp Harmony? at the end of the journey?
The Japanese Americans feel very weak, angry, sad, feared, or some might be excited of adventure. Some might miss their home and family
it a little to short for an answer, but I can understand what you mean
ReplyDeleteSay why did they feel like that. What makes them like that.
ReplyDeleteYou should talk more about why they have those feelings, it is because they don't want to go to this camp or something else?
ReplyDeleteinteresting the way you have shorten it so short that i felt like you're missing something as an answer. Though it was simple and clear. Also, i think you have to tell the reason. Why? Why did they feel that way? [just a suggestion] :]
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